IN SOME COUNTRIES, TEENAGERS ARE ENCOURAGED TO DO PART-TIME JOBS BY SOME PEOPLE.OTHERS DISAGREE.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Nowadays, many youngsters are attracted to part-time work, during their studies compared to the olden days. while some people support to do, but few of them are against this in some countries. this essay will discuss both the views and my opinion.
In some countries like the US, Australia, London, and Newzealand, teens are encouraged to work part-time during their higher studies. These countries rely on the fact that working part-time will boost up their knowledge and skills in enormous fields like working at fast-food centers, working as Accountants. Furthermore, this also enhances the quality of higher education. As a result, teens are aware of their future, this will be a positive approach for their future.
On the other hand, In some countries like India, mostly teenagers are devoted to the crucial entrance exams which are very vital for their higher education. teenagers are not evoked to do part-time jobs as it may distract them from their academics. Therefore, negative consequences may result. And their focus diverted to earnings rather than their career, where they actually need to concentrate more on their higher education.
To conclude, part-time work experience is thought beneficial in some countries, some of them are against it due to its consequence on their education. I strongly believe that a part-time job helps in building up practical knowledge for their careers and also it helps to gain the strategies for their better earnings in further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, may, so, therefore, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29831932773 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69680153277 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1161908934 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266395518146 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105069344702 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873745813639 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181450187289 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677133630089 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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