In this competitive world, people are extremely worried about their children's academic development, therefore, a large number of guardians think that merely relying on school hours wouldn't be enough for scholar, however, separate tuition is a must touplift their performance in the class, whereas, a lot of others opine that this notion will not be that impactful for the learners. In my views, private coaching is certainly advantageous on the contrary the importance of the classroom can not be sidelined.
To start with, there are a number of benefits of attending personal tuition at a faculty's home. Firstly, less disturbance is created as compared to the classroom due to the fact that in the classroom many students study together where noise is supremely common. Secondly, extra focus is provided by the teacher's side that helps the student to overcome the obstacle faced in learning. Lastly during this time period teacher comes to know about the weakness of a particular student which is hardly possible to know in the lecture room.
On the other hand, the classroom environment is vital for any student because it does not only provide the opportunities to study in the group but also it allows transmission of thoughts and opinion with the colleagues, For example, in countries like China in Japan class teachers allow the brightest students to help their peers who are weak in academic fields, however, this trick is enormously helping out in learning.
To recapitulate, a personal tutoring session at a tutor's home can significantly provide aid in learning but attending lectures in the lecture hall allows students to do group study as well as create a strong bond with their peers.
- These days it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation migration from the country to the city and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed 78
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 78
- Many doctors say that people in today s world do not do enough physical exercise What do you think are the causes of this What solutions are there to this problem 89
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 95
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ldrens academic development, therefore, a large number of guardians think that merely relying on ...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ink that merely relying on school hours wouldnt be enough for scholar, however, separat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, as well as, in my view, on the contrary, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11827956989 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77431857683 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.336191166 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.75 7.06120827912 322% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171753878673 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703089268246 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273213264111 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096515039509 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196976610914 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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