In our world today, there are different views about how wastes and pollution can be tackled in our environment. Some people believe that companies and private individual persons, rather than governments, should make arrangements to tidy up the pollution that was produced by them. Although I believe that individuals should take care of the wastes they produce, the government should also be fully involved.
To begin, companies and people from different neighbourhoods are expected to cater for the wastes they generated. The reason is that everyone is responsible for the waste they generate, and they are supposed to dispose it in the right way. In Aba, for instance, residents and factories in various areas of the city ensure that the wastes generated by them are disposed, and taken to the general dumpster. Clearly, it is expedient that people and workplaces attend to their personal trash, and make sure that it is properly taken care of.
To continue, the government's involvement in disposing waste should not be overlooked or ignored. In other words, the authorities should be the first consideration when we think about disposing out waste because the citizens and business organizations pay their taxes. For example, the ASEPA was created for the sole purpose of clearing the refuse dumps generated by the people of Abia State. Therefore, the authorities should be responsible for the waste produced by the masses, and see to it that it is attended to.
To conclude, I agree that individuals should be held accountable for the refuse generated by them, and our leaders need to handle the waste production of their regions, so that the stress can be lifted off its citizens.
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- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...erly taken care of. To continue, the governments involvement in disposing waste should n...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and see to it that it is attended to. To conclude, I agree that individuals sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12635379061 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81268910619 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530685920578 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9523013865 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213334353562 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086134033012 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942500161422 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133866493019 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966286243138 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.