Doing things in a better way is essential whether it is done by children or guided them by their parents. Some individuals opine that parents should take decisions for their children while others believe that it should be on children to decide what they want to do in the future. This essay intends to discuss both perspectives as well as my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are various reasons why people think parents should direct their children in their own way. The main one of them is children are immature, and they are not able to decide what is good for them. In this way, parents can choose the right direction for their children. Another reason is that parents are well experienced, and they know their children very well. As they are aware about the weaknesses of their young ones. So, it will easy for them to guide children as per their own wish.
On the other hand, children should learn to sort out things by their own because of the following reasons. Firstly, children become independent. They do not need to depend upon their parents to pursue any kind of skill or career. Secondly, children feel freely and choose best for them which is not possible under the pressure of their parents. In this way, they manage their things independently and become more successful in the future.
In my opinion, children should get some freedom from parents side to opt only those areas in which they are interested. It will not only help them to enhance their concentration level but also make them more successful. At the same time, parents should play a significant role in children's life. Children should get advice from their parents on those matters which are beyond from their control. Automatically, it will aids to create better understanding among them.
To conclude, it can be said that it is important to give liberty to children to make choices, but, the onus is on the parents to give them right direction by having discussions with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ay intends to discuss both perspectives as well as my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and they know their children very well. As they are aware about the weaknesses of ...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'aid'
Suggestion: aid
...m their control. Automatically, it will aids to create better understanding among th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78885630499 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47878486428 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50146627566 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8557232975 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.65 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459115614795 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144437894441 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815232488965 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267100863087 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799929293794 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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