Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?
In the meantime, working after the age of 60 has an effective factor when it comes to social development. Whilst some are of the belief that giving permission to elder people to work after the 60s it has negative consequences, others have a diverse view. I disagree with people should work after reach 60 years old. In this essay, my point of view will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
To begin with, males and females who are allowed to work after the 60s cause some issues to countries developments. Not only do they effect on productivity but also they make economic problems. In other words, the efficiency of employments after this age less than young ones, that means the output. Moreover, they may have some health problems which have an act on their productivity. For instance, in 2017, research has been published by the Economist newspaper showed that the efficiency of old people especially after 55 decreased by 65% due to some health issues.
In addition to that, future generations should have a chance to play an effective role in society. If authorities give the authorization to work after the 60s , this would have detrimental impact on the future of the youth. In other words, elder people should empty their places to teenagers to participate on their country’s future; they aware by the modern technology which helps on. Canada is an example for this when it uses youth in high position to raise community standards.
In conclusion, I would like to restate my point of view that governments should not give permission to work after retirement age which is at 60 years old; I believe that it has a detrimental effect on society standards. It is recommended that decision-makers should impose laws to prevent work after this age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9364548495 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81968477356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2718188237 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299718138878 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992156989581 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804404361408 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184634954258 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082059582545 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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