It is true that mandatory retirement age is being extended in many nations and this is causing some problems in society. Nonetheless, I disagree that such workers should be retired. A number of arguments surround my opinion.
To begin with, we have to face the reality that today we belong to a graying society and the latest demographic trends show that very soon one in four persons will be over the age of 60. Can we afford to retire such a huge population? The answer is a definite 'no'. If they don't work they are a liability on the government, as then the government has to provide pensions. But, if they work they remain independent and at the same time pay taxes.
Another reason for keeping such people working is that they have years of experience, which can go waste if they retire early. No doubt, young people are more energetic and work more enthusiastically, but the older employees know the ins and outs of the company. Someone has rightly said that a new broom sweeps clear but an old broom knows the corners'. What is more, these employees also do not do job-hopping and are more
loyal to the company they work for. They are also prepared to work for less, which is ultimately beneficial to the
company or organisation they work for.
Those who wish to see them retired soon, have the problem of unemployed youth in their mind. Undoubtedly, youth unemployment also is a big problem as it leads to violence and crime in the society. The young people are very energetic and if this energy is not channelized in the right direction then they can go astray and cause problems. Job openings should be created for them in some way or the other. However, if the elderly are retired earlier, we shall be adding more burden on these young shoulders to support a burgeoning dependent population.
To sum up, retiring people above 60 would be unwise and unpractical decision, considering the changing demographic trends towards an ageing society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, thus, as to, no doubt, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7514619883 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65058923047 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56432748538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4830254089 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5263157895 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209066544208 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640231280883 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594547192676 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107189312681 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544569751395 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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