Some people opine that there are too many options for people to choose. I completely agree with the statement that these days people have too many options and will explain the reasons why.
Firstly, the rapid advancement of technology has led to the growing number of options for almost everything in the world. Many corporations started to invent a lot of new products which has ease people's life. As a result, people nowadays become lazier and effortless because technology advancement has helped them a lot. For instance, there are currently a lot of online food delivery service which can be accessed easily by people. Those services have different kind of vendors and different price range which can be suited to people's taste and financial condition. Consequently, people become lazier to cook by themselves because they can get food that they want easily.
Secondly, during globalization era, the competition level between corporations become more intense. Because many firms just want to be profitable, they started to follow the trend by creating trending product. As a result, many products in the same product category started to emerge, with their own quality and price variations. This growing number of options has caused people to be more consumptive, because they now can get the same product, with lower price. For example, currently oversized t-shirt has become a trend in the fashion world. Many clothing brands then established their own oversized t-shirt ranging from those with expensive price to cheap price. Hence, if people do not have a lot of money, they can still buy the oversized t-shirt. They do not need to hold their shopping desire anymore because currently the affordable oversized t-shirt is available in marketplace. This case happens to many products which resulting to people become more consumptive as a result of the growing number of options.
In conclusion, I completely agree that these days people have too many options because the rapid advancement of technology has led to the growing number of options for almost everything in the world which make people become lazier and effortless. Moreover, the competition level between corporations become more intense which has led to the emergence of a lot of products in the same product category, and has caused people to be more consumptive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...rent price range which can be suited to peoples taste and financial condition. Conseque...
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Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey can get food that they want easily. Secondly, during globalization era, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2037037037 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69258240357 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439153439153 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7744332476 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.526315789 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180152554411 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682018094143 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703210151409 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150061735215 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086907581442 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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