Some people opine that these days we have excessive options. I completely agree that there are so many options for people to choose because of several reasons.
Firstly, the rapid technology advancement has increased the number of choices for almost everything in the world. Many corporations began to create inventions to help ease people's life. As a result, people no longer need to make a lot of efforts in getting something that they want which lead to them become lazier. For instance, there are currently a lot of online food delivery services that offer different restaurants and different price range. People do not need to do grocery shopping and cooking anymore because they can just order the food easily from those online food delivery services. As a result, people will become lazier than they were before.
Secondly, the increasing competition during this globalization era has made firms to follow the trend. Because corporations want to be profitable, they decided to produce a product that is currently trending, with their own style and price variation. This has caused the emergence of multiple products for almost every product category. Consequently, people become more consumptive because the choices for products are getting wider. They no longer need to save their money or hold their shopping plan due to their lack of money, because those products are available in different price range. For example, jeans jacket is currently trending in fashion world, and a lot of shopping brands started to produce it. If previously the choices for buying jeans jacket were limited with certain model and price range, nowadays the choices are very wide and can be adjusted to buyers' model and price preferences. This situation has made people to become more consumptive than before.
In conclusion, I completely agree that these days people have excessive options because the rapid technology advancement has increased the number of choices for almost everything, which made people to be lazier. Moreover, the increasing competition during this globalization era has made firms to follow the trend which has caused the emergence of multiple products for almost every product category and has made people to become more consumptive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27855153203 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64545069608 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459610027855 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5751082503 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.277777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165924412425 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613672374492 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521054625499 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129638988511 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568108587819 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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