The choices can change our life. Some people, including me, hold the opinion that they face numerous options to select these days; however, others opine that most things in their life are mandatory. This essay delves into the matter further and concludes at the end.
It is argued that some people find their life full of obligatory choices. They believe that they can choose their educational field or follow their skill or talent such as artistic inclination. However, it is not guaranteed their futuristic career, and in the other words, destiny resigns their job. This group does not consider the vigorous attempt of a successful group, which works in their favorable job field experienced gigantic pressure to achieve success. Finally, they believe in the obligatory world did not strive as high as the successful people. For example, Jim Carry said that his father was a talented person that he could have been a comedian; however, he chose to not try his chance, as posed to me.
People are in charge of their life's route. If we look at some of the professional soccer players, we will find out that everyone has many options to select. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo shows a brilliant performance at 37-year-olds, whereas Jack Wilshire ended up his career at age 26. In this case, the former and the latter selected the professional and unprofessional life, respectively, even though both were talented. In addition, opting for an option to achieve something is not a linear path. It means that people might select the option but they do not hit their crown achievement. In this case, they should know that following what they chose has not straightforward outcome, but it is more like a long-awaited journey.
In conclusion, all people have to opt for many choices in their life, whereas they might face some obligatory decision. But in general, people can select their destiny through decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, so, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00314465409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64629881776 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0210848354 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151441720568 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516086203674 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446036952007 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103624464009 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399653115099 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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