The choices can change our life. Some people, including me, hold the opinion that they face numerous options to select these days; however, others opine that most things in their life are mandatory. This essay delves into the matter further and concludes at the end.
It is argued that some people find their life full of obligatory choices. They believe that they can choose their educational field or follow their skill or talent such as artistic inclination. However, it is not guaranteed their future career, and in other words, they have to do everything to make a living. However, this group does not consider the vigorous attempt of successful groups, which work in their favorable job field experienced and under immense pressure to achieve success. Actually, they chose that they did not strive as high as the successful people. For example, Jim Carry said that his father was a talented person that he could have been a comedian; however, he chose not to try his chance.
People are in charge of their life's route. If we look at some of the professional soccer players, we will find out that everyone has many options to select. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo shows a brilliant performance at 37-year-olds, whereas Jack Wilshire ended up his career at age 26. In this case, the former and the latter selected the professional and unprofessional life, respectively, although both were talented. In addition, opting for an option to achieve something is not a linear path. It means that people might select the option, but they do not hit their crown achievement. In this case, they should know that following what they chose has not had a specific outcome, but it is more like a long-awaited journey. For instance, a stock market trader was in red for a while. However, he should not be disappointed about his decision because, over the long term, his approach would be profitable.
In conclusion, all people have to opt for many choices in their life, whereas they might face some obligatory decision. Nevertheless, in general, people can select their destiny through decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97714285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64436867972 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7725418305 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146137468728 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479679209607 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453422237635 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100958709467 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350332468657 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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