Somw would argue that it is crucial for kids to attend a regular school, while others would say educating children at home is the best option for a child's growth. This essay will argue that it is imperative for children to go to school so as to enhance their social development. Children that are homeschooled are usually isolated and because they do not mix with other kids of their own age , many may end up being depressed which may invariably lead to negative impact such as suicidal thoughts.
Children who are taught at home are usually very smart because of one-on-one style of teaching, and may even move at a faster pace than their peers who attend normal school. This is often the case as they would not be hindered by classmates who are not so sound intelligence wise.More often than not, these kids also have access to technological devices without any restrictions, and this also enhances thier knowledge unlike their counterparts who have to study under some strict rules or regimes. Recent research , has shown that most homeschooled kids are Geniuses.
Despite, the argument above it is better to attend regular school with other students in class to build a kind of social bond which is of utmost importance to their growth . Stattistics has shown that kids who go to school are better at managing their emotions and control their temper better than those who are educated at home.
In conclusion, it is essential for childrden to be inculcated into normal school system rather than being educated at home in solitude so as to help build them up socially, emotionally and of course intelligence wise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, while, as to, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60859023263 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8969807871 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.777777778 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216644982471 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998901952812 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838509108847 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134450238257 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835236039187 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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