Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
In recent decade, there has been a continuous debate between experts of different clime on whether the advent of modern technology has helped improved people’s social lives or the reverse is the case. In my opinion, I vehemently agree with the former considering the immeasurable benefit associated with it. This essay will discuss will discuss how technology has helped man to always keep in touch and capacity building abilty.
To start with, it is no longer news that gadgets such as telephones, tablets, digital cameras, laptops among others have become a part of our daily life. In as much they tend to distract us, when properly used, one can harness the features inherent in them by staying connected with friends and loved ones. For example, people have easily increased their network of friends through social media platforms such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram among others. This is achieved from one’s comfort zone. For example, I have been able to make friends across all continents through my Twitter page.
Furthermore, the recent Covid-19 pandemic has made man once more appreciate technology. Ordinarily, businesses would have remained moribund if not for opportunities created by technology wherein meetings are held online via apps such as Zoom and Skype. Most recently, my organization had her first virtual Annual General Meeting on zoom wherein key stakeholders further expressed the benefits associated with technology.
In conclusion, it can be argued that people have lost vital social skills because they are often glued to their phone, these skills can as well be gained through networking sites. From the above examples, it is evident that technology has enhanced people’s social lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'will discuss'.
Suggestion: will discuss
... benefit associated with it. This essay will discuss will discuss how technology has helped man to always...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35531135531 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64489664641 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673992673993 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.430826453 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201198632301 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670205968316 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469664777877 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112679199733 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500249768221 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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