Different countries have different cultures, and when it comes to tourism, some people think that the host country should acknowledge these differences and accept them, while others believe that tourists should follow the local culture and do not do anything in contradiction with it.
On the one hand, being a touristic country means being open to the world, welcoming different cultures is an essential factor for any touristic country in order to succeed in tourism and attract visitors from around the world. Therefore, the different culture of those visitors may contradict with the local culture, and yet it must be accepted and moreover welcomed. Meanwhile, the local people must be opened and accept visitors' behaviour to make them comfortable and therefore want to stay and spend money which helps the local economy and also allows people to benefit from those newcomers.
On the other hand, visitors from overseas can be disrespectful and rude to the local community. Some conservative countries forbid some kinds of clothing or behaviour or even foods, to give an example, most of the Islamic countries forbid alcohol and some kinds of clothing, and most visitors do not respect that, and this can damage the local community and affect some local people especially children, which will affect the society badly.
In conclusion, although differences between cultures is a good thing, and must be acknowledged and welcomed in the local cultures, I believe that visitors must respect the local culture. In other words, as long as visitors show respect and follow the local law they are welcomed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow the local law they are welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25096525097 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6219087645 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532818532819 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3838076307 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.0 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334944849341 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147480584015 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077560331858 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215911223804 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731648685756 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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