Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Owing a car is considered an important factor for many people today. In my country the majority of people have a car loan since it is the easiest method of transportation. While some people think that cars have more disadvantages than advantages, I agree that they are equal .
On the first hand, cars have a lot advantages. Starting with easy transportation which definitely will be better if you own a car. In fact ,especially in the less developed countries there are neither metro station nor buses for public transportation. Therefore the availability of the car is a must. In addition, you are free to choose the road you want to get to your address. For instance, if you are going at work you can choose the shortcut roads instead of following the main one as the metro does. Least and not last when you have a car you feel independent so you can organize your daily schedule easily.
Moving on the disadvantages, actually they include both the person itself and the environment. Firstly, cars have increase the sedentary life style of the population since when you park your car in the garage or near your home you don't have to walk to find the nearest metro station. Moreover you used your car everywhere even when you go for shopping in the grocery near your home. Secondly, cars are more costly than pubic transportation since fuel is expensive , also the cars needs routine maintenance. Let's move now to the negative impacts on the environment .In fact, pollution is increasing secondary to cars and the ozone layers is being affected. Lately in the developed countries government are encouraging people to use public transportation to lower the sources of pollution.
In conclusion, having a car has a lot of pros and cons, but in my opinion I would rather prefer to have a car despite its disadvantages .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81847133758 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88511286524 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1381849492 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359668863891 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123288239086 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976381454463 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252421439763 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665352295765 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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