Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
Some people insist that it is important to keep their place such as their house and office with putting in order and in the same location. However, others say that it is too much stressful to do that every day. Although, this background inevitably leads people to controversy wherein stand both positive and negative perspectives regarding this issue, I agree that it is important to organize our stuff well in order.
To begin with, if we organize our stuff well such as putting our documents back in order and clean our room up, it will save our time. For example, if we need to find our important documents in our work in a hurry, we will be able to find it straight way. Also, if we need any stuff such as a pencil, pen and cutter, we can find them easily. It means that we do not have to waste time to find our stuff if it is arranged well. Therefore, we need to keep our place tidy.
Secondly, it will make our feel better and release our stress. If we do not clean well in our room and house, it gives us more stress because we will keep thinking in our mind that we have to clean them. Hence, it gets more stress and feeling worse. In addition, if we organize the room, house and workplace regularly, it takes less time than cleaning all at once. Thus, it will release our stress and feel better.
In conclusion, despite the fact that it can waste time for some people who do not like to organize well, my opinion is that it is essential for people to keep their place such as home, backyard and workplace because it gives us positive perspectives such as saving time and get rid of our stress in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34868421053 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25814162556 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463815789474 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8220770887 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1206266966 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509371540606 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579343279624 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100987831677 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669486792956 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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