Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
It is believed by some that it is beneficial to maintain a clean and organized workplace or home. In my opinion, I think that having a well organised and neat set up at work and at home, will result in better performance and an enjoyable lifestyle.
Maintaining an orderly and well kept up workspace should help increase efficiency and lead to benefits to both the individual and the company. For instance, having documents and reports properly stored in easily accessible locations can save time looking for these, which would then be better utilized in doing more productive tasks. Moreover, a cleaner, clutter free work desk improves the drive and motivation of an individual to perform at their optimal levels, resulting in achieving personal and company targets. It also projects a sense of responsibility and appropriate behavior.
On the other hand, when it comes to homes, an organized and well maintained house serves to instill and promote a sense of cleanliness, well being and comfort. One obvious reason to keep the house clean is to prevent the spread and infestation of harmful insects or rodents, which can be carriers of diseases and germs. Furthermore, having all utensils and food items stored and labelled and placed in assigned locations, can make cooking a much more enjoyable, stress free and less time consuming chore. All these reasons help to elevate the mood and improve the health and well being of the residents.
In conclusion, having an organized and well maintained work or home helps drive productivity and also makes living a much more pleasurable experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a much more pleasurable experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14122137405 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81599990878 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9743279964 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0630849274885 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299400076665 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470618826207 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499777600172 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431820570432 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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