Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Money is an indispensable source of survival in the world full of inflation. Also, it represents status and provide all the facilities to live a blissful life. This essay will discuss how wealth is a good measurement for people happiness and will also illustrate another way to live a cheerful life.
Money is quintessential for everyone in order to fulfil all requirements from basic to maintain status. Scarcity of money sometimes become obstacles to accomplish certain things. For example, the lack of resources does not allow students for higher education, some people might be deprived of food, medication and accommodation. Plenty of money give a lot of reasons to remain happy for instance, wealthy people can plan International tours, shopping from branded outlets, throwing parties etc without worrying about their monthly budget unlike middle or lower class people. Person always wanted to be affluent in order to complete their desire hands down.
Another way to remain calm and satisfy in life is working for social welfare that provides inner peace and satisfaction. A lot of money somewhere is the cause for belligerent behaviour of people, as they hardly manage time for their family, friends and for themselves for remaining in the race of earning more and more.
Secondly, interaction with people, family members, sharing love and support each other in every step of life help to deal with many problems that money cannot solve. Whenever it is about emotional attachment then money is not efficient to replace happiness that beloved can provide.
The nature of happiness is multifaceted. This essay argued that money is a straightforward way to measure happiness, though it is not absolutely accurate. It is also proposed that helping needy persons and getting love from those who are close to our heart is equally important to lead a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... many problems that money cannot solve. Whenever it is about emotional attachment then m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21782178218 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76957671393 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0868541473 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291407247884 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892511634596 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495400112165 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152423141616 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441532019247 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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