Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in the cinema.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people argue that with the advancement in gadgets like mobile phones and iPad watching movie in cinemas has become redundant. While other says that going to cinema is essential to get the true essence of a movie. However, in my opinion I consider that watching films on phones and tablets is more convenient as compared to spending hefty amount and time on going to cinema.
On the one hand, many people believe that with the latest innovations in technology usefulness of cinema industry in declining rapidly and I agree because today it is much easier to watch movie of choice online without any hassle . In other words, plethora of online movie websites are free of cost and one can download movie with excellent graphics. For instance, Netflix movie site has thousands of movies which can be downloaded in mobile phones and watched it later during free time and there is no need to spare time from tight schedule for going to cinema.
On the other hand, many advocate that for entertainment purpose films had better been seen on big screen because cinemas are meant to provide proper arrangements like high definition picture quality, sound amplifier and dark background. Moreover, there is no distraction in between playing movie. For example, considering need for public entertainment local government is building more cinema facilities for its people such as Odeon, Cineplex and Arena. However, I believe tickets for these cinemas are costly which constraint it only for elite class.
While people may vary in their opinions I consider that watching movie on cellular phones and tablets is more enjoyable and handy creating no hassle, and paying high fare rate and wasting time going to cinemas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0777385159 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51544278218 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7410622707 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25065425 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963101272429 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527276323861 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151467162753 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558209299408 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.