Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Entertainment is significant aspect of every human life. we can entertain ourselves by watching movies. although individual say that movies can be watched on our mobile but some people say that if you want to enjoy full then you need to go to cinema. I partially agree with this notion and further in this essay I will discuss some views to express my opinion.
On the one hand to enjoy our free time we can observe movies on mobile. firstly, watching film on tablets is important source of entertainment and other to spend your holidays in a proper way. secondly, viewing the picture at home on our phone is also a time saving process because you do not need to go outside. for example, in this busy schedule everyone is interested to see film at home because in the internet world you can watch every new motion picture.so, it is clear that you do not need to go to cinema you can easily watch film on touchscreen.
On the other hand, some humans believe that to entertain them self going to Cinema is best rather than to watch movies on tablets. most importantly, for observing feature film there is no need to go to cinema hall because it is time-consuming process you need to book tickets for watching Motion Picture. additionally, you need to spend money for viewing the picture in the whole as a result of it Money is wasted because without paying any amount you can not see the film, recently students, spend their time to watching movies in the cinema hall due to which some time they cannot go to their college at time. so ,it is not obligatory for see picture in the cinema.
To conclude I believe that observed the feature film in the hole is not urgent you can watch the movie on his phones for save our money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49206349206 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.456125461 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1212818102 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332869232831 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124173644985 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728586214149 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210487849083 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667961705741 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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