Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp

Learning new languages is the biggest asset for people. It is often argued that people seeking foreign language is to work and travel in a foreign country. From my prescriptive public by practicing speaking foreign language adds a huge advantage not only in work and travel but in other corners too. Learning fresh language helps people in widening their knowledge and prosperity.
Society can be benefited greatly in many ways by pursing foreign languages. Public can encounter culture of habitant of other communities easily by knowing their languages. For instance, citizens in our country learn English, Spanish, Germany languages which helps them to experience culture in these languages.one can also enhance his knowledge while seeking fresh accent. For example, a person can learn unknown theories efficiently which are written in other than his own language.
Moreover, people can build their confidence by knowing unfamiliar language.one can communicate with ease with other language people and able to spend time with the citizens of different culture and nativity which reflects the knowledge the person. A person can apply his knowledge effectively at different areas by using the different languages. One can do researches in different parts of the world by learning universal language. Recent studies on people knowledge shown that the people who speaks multi languages are more successful that the people speak a single language.
In conclusion, practicing foreign languages makes people wise not only in work and travel but other corners also. Humans can enhance their skills and capabilities with an ease by learning new languages.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.453125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73199673359 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52734375 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9892335347 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273020932688 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115539720825 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883410355577 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202142463347 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996141901099 0.056905535591 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.