due to Globalization, it is very convenient for the people to travel to another countries.some proportion of people believe that sole purpose of acquiring knowledge of distinct languages is travelling and profession. However, i do not agree with this viewpoint as there can be another reasons as well.
To begin with, it is vital to have a command on the language of country in which we are travelling as it will enable a person to communicate with the people residing at the corresponding place as well as to understand their conversation so as to respond accordingly.In addition to this, even while working in a international company if a person is not proficient in language skills then he will find it difficult to adjust with environment of that place and it will have a drastic effect on his work performance which will definitely reduce his chances of promotion. therefore, learning different languages play a essential role in succeeding in this day and age.
Nevertheless, considering that travelling and job are only reasons to attain the knowledge of overseas languages is not appropriate.there are some individuals who have curiosity to explore foreign traditions and cultures which cannot be possible without having command on the language.moreover, students visit abroad for the purpose of higher education.
all of this being said i believe that learning different language should be not only for satisfying our physical needs,like money but also our moral needs, because never before had such a big thirst for knowledge been displayed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25293467503 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.170282503 49.4020404114 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.166666667 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6666666667 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.3333333333 7.06120827912 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195719154405 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913508769042 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430414559966 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114051006618 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374585793699 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.0946893788 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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