It is quite a common discussion among the parents that they need to promote their children to join any streamlined group events in their leisure times, while some others say to leave them on their own. This essay will discuss the above-mentioned views and will support the fact as to why it is important for the parents to make their children enroll in the activities that support their overall development.
It is so necessary that children should spend their leisure time wisely and parents have a key role in making it worth. Firstly, their social life would be healthy if they join any group activities apart from their studies. For example, enrolling them into public speaking forums or boot camps, makes them interact with the peers of their age and remove the fear of stage. Secondly, encouraging them to join those groups that enhances their physical strength is important. It has been proven that children who does activities like dancing, singing are more active and perform well at their studies when compared to others.
Despite the above advantages, certain demographics of people say to leave their children on their own in their leisure time. Their view is to give enough freedom so that the children can think of their own on what to do. It is because they feel the children has a lot of pressure already in their classrooms.
In conclusion, there is a good debate that goes on whether to encourage the children to involve them in group activities or to leave them alone. In my opinion, compared to the pressure that builds up on them, signing up the children into such forums would help in their better career as individual and to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8118466899 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4705429886 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3141256226 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.479253415631 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195050414257 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104480881787 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313072481458 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122704583661 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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