It is true that, in this contemporary era, it is better way to foster their children among whole family like, uncles, aunts, grandparents rather than only parents. However, in my consideration this statement is useful for children and I am agree with this.
To start with, there are numerous examples that upper statement is good for children. Firstly, work is being done nowadays by many parents and they are not able to spend their time on their children but if, they would live with whole family then all members are able to protect their children and give attention on children. Secondly, parents keep doing their own office work in home and when children look that they are not interested in us so they just spend their whole time with their electronic games, computers, mobile phones e.t.c. Furthermore, when they with their grandparents so they always tell about core culture, moral values, basic ethics, and so on. Because they have deep knowledge and that knowledge are collected by their experience. That is why they give always insightful suggestions to their children. Moreover, they also tell some old stories and play with them.
Another reason could be, children would not take any type of pressure on themselves because they able to enjoy with their cousins. In addition, they can built the ability that how we can improve our relationship and remove conflicts in some situations. For instance, these days, children want to live alone and they don't develop abilities regarding society or their ethics.
Looking at the other view, parents can also bringing up their children easily if, they do not work then they can spend their own time with their children. Moreover, if children have no big families so nobody would interfare in their studies and it is good for children.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, parents can take care of their children without any problem yet. We must understand that whole family is better influence on children rather than parents
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...atement is useful for children and I am agree with this. To start with, there are ...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y parents and they are not able to spend their time on their children but if, the...
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Line 3, column 771, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'give'.
Suggestion: always give
...d by their experience. That is why they give always insightful suggestions to their childre...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...th their cousins. In addition, they can built the ability that how we can improve our...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s, children want to live alone and they dont develop abilities regarding society or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47589851607 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3073885796 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235187982031 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104653936503 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743385694993 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165902169186 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080879304283 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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