Some people dispute that travel by airplane would continue growing without any limit. The opinion of others is to control the wide range of flights by governments. Personally, I agree that limit the number of flights is necessary, I will discuss both sides in this essay.
The significant reason in favor is that more aeroplane travel will bring a great deal of pollution to the earth. The research and data showed that pollution is the top problem in this century. On the one hand, it will be harmful to people's health, such as lung and nose disease. Especially for the youth, if the air were worst than before, they will have varies of ill at an early age. On the other hand, if we encouraged air travel rather than we imagine. more pollution could damage the environment of this planet. That could impact human life quantity, even earth life. We cannot imagine the animals and trees are getting less and less.
There is some positive argument that we might grow to travel by airplane. It is easy for individuals to save time and energy to travel a long distance. First, the people who take the aeroplane is able to use more time to create things or study. Second, people could start their work as soon as they can because people needs rest such long time after driving or travel by train.
In conclusion, I agree that we would better to limit the wide range of flights. This is the best for the people who live on the earth.
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Suggestion: where; we
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Message: Did you mean 'worse'?
Suggestion: worse
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Suggestion: More
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56976744186 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26222815414 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7200820295 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3529411765 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193041926056 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590294664581 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643645426418 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129376201621 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864984372653 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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