Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent decade, there has been intense debate by educational expert whether undergraduates should be allowed to choose their choice course or subjects directly related to science and technology. In my opinion, I will align my thought with the former referencing articles from the Daily Times Journal and New York Times.
To begin with, it can be argued that students, at that stage of their life are not well informed on the right subject to study at the university. Consequently, the need to guide them on courses (such as Chemistry, Physics, Engineering and Medicine) useful in the field of science and technology. With the right mentorship, they can excel in their discipline. According to a recent survey conducted by the Daily Times Journal on the leading engineering firms in London, seventy percent of the top executives were guided on their choice of course.
Conversely, our society is such that youths get exposed to the real world right from childhood; all thanks to technology. Accordingly, they develop passion for a career that best suites them. Steve Harris, a renowned motivational speaker said, “Find what makes you happy and build your world around it”. Students tend to excel significantly in disciplines not related to science and technology (such as economics, art, and sociology) thereby building a society driven by passion. To illustrate my point, The New York Times published an article on 5th June 2020 that ninety percent entrepreneurs around the `world freely choose their course at the university.
As a closing remark, although it can be argued that students should be guided to choose science related courses, the benefits of freely choosing a desired course at the university very well outweighs the reverse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, conversely, if, so, well, of course, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2304964539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80516178665 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1708030638 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194390682879 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653970829658 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571746148598 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120694237839 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345069204478 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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