Certainly, it is true that, in this contemporary era, value of hard work is being escalating day by day among people for getting monetary gain. Most of the people introspect that only hard work is crucial where others contemplate that it may be more reason to attain financial success. According to my perspective, definately it may be more reason for getting financial success.
To start with, hard work is dominating parameter of acquire financial success. They start doing hard work from starting of their life like, selection of school, after that Universities then finding a good job etc. Moreover, more hard work is being done by people according to their capacity like work is being done more than 12 hours in a day by them for earning bread and butter. For example, if, people set up their own business so they will have to do 24×7 work due to competition in market with different brands and all things before earning any profit.
Looking at the other view, there are lots of reason for getting financial gain rather than tough grind like, long-term investments, acquiring new skills etc. If, we would learn new skills it is also splendid. For instance, if we invest our money at the age of 25 in share market carefully so, it is good in our retirement age in front of those people who do not have any plans regarding their upcoming days. Second, money can be saved from monthly expenses by people. Third, dedication for getting financial success it should be in every person.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly hard work is a key of our life instead of any other thing for getting financial gain yet, we must understand that all things are important in its own place. We could not depend on one way for attaining financial success. However, if we should work hard with smart work so it would be a brilliant thing for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5011860155 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1412476665 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226267153399 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968553301657 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730061553796 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158594792876 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453102990419 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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