It is true that, in this contemporary era, demanding of good Universities is being escalating day by day. It is thought by some people that getting University degrees are essential thing to be successful for us, whereas others contemplate that it is dispensable. According to my perspective, we could do lots of things without attaining any graduation degree.
To start with, Firstly, universities degrees are mandatory if you want to go in a particular fields like, government sector, accounting, medical, C.A, engineering etc because if you don't have these degrees so companies would not provide you any job. Secondly, everyone wants to earn lots of money that's why University degrees are important for them. For example, work is being done nowadays by my elder brother in medical field and he has his graduation degree along with PhD so that's why he is able to do work in a company.
Looking at the other view, if you don't have any degree so you could also earn more money as compared to those people who have their graduation degree. In addition, we know many bollywood, Hollywood, cricketers etc. Who are earning much money without having any degree. For instance, Akshay Kumar, he is one of the popular bollywood star in all over the world. He is passed his only 12 class. However, he charges 135 crores rupees for making a movie.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly University degrees are important for us if we want to get success and all things in our life yet, we must understand having a graduation degrees is not important because nobody can judge you on the basis of your degrees. Furthermore, I saw many big business man and superstars who don't have single degree.
- Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 78
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your own opinion 81
- In many Countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of Crime How can we deal with those causes 93
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food This has negative effects on both families and societies To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85763888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75709093859 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9483885892 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161200042082 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512048035642 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620863596117 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106710992444 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428840668167 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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