In the fast-paced world, people have different views about how to have relaxation, one's advice is to have ample rest such as sleeping is the best solution, others say doing some exercise such as sporting is much better. Personally, I think that the ideas are debatable, and will, therefore, examine both sides in this essay and give my opinion.
Generally, to have rest in between or after work or take a short afternoon nap during schooltime is well-know methods that feel relaxing. The high-presure environment everywhere, especially in modern society, forced people to meet their goals in a career or gain better exam results in school. For example, the majority of high school in China have a rule to ask students to take 15 - 30 minutes of sleep after lunch, people who work in school all believed the best solution to have exceptional relaxation to reduce stress is efficient rest. I remembered when I was in high school, after a nap, I used to gain knowledge sufficiently because my brian was sharpened.
Admittedly, for some people who have other thinking which is doing exercise to improve body, thus calming no matter their physical or mental attitude. However, it not only depends on personality but also relies on their capability. After some activities, for example, playing some sports, they would probably gain more pressure from sports itself, it is helpless for themselves to relieve, in the meantime, tiredness caused either sleepy or distressed.
In conclusion, simply go to sleep is functional for the public and that is the best way to relax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ent views about how to have relaxation, ones advice is to have ample rest such as sl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02298850575 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73968444716 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0781499301 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263275178371 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880729836887 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630236081237 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156090585039 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644979455883 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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