Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The sense of competition has been encouraged by a lot of people, while others argue that co-operation is more important to be taught to our offspring. This essay totally agrees that we should encourage the spirit of challenge between the youth. This essay will discuss both opinions of who encouraging competition, and who believing in instilling co-operation in children.
On the one hand, healthy competition between children not only helps them to study and learn more, but also to win and achieve their goals. In addition, it supports them to discover their strength points and broaden their horizons, moreover it helps different institutions to find the specialist in different fields. For example, the scientist Ahmed Zweail’s geniality has been discovered during a science competition of his university and another.
On the Other hands, people who support co-operation believe that the sense of competition puts unnecessary pressure on children. And approve that children not only can gain more knowledge and new information from each, but also helps them to deal with others other during work en- masse, moreover studying on relaxation without stresses will help them to be more focused. For instance, a research from world health organization shown that more stresses on students lead to lack of studying.
In conclusion, our young ones should be taught to try their best to achieve their goals by improving healthy competition among them and they should be always under controlled pressure at the early stage of their lives which helps them to depend on themselves. I recommend that schools ought to increase the competitions during scholastic year to improve the benefits of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32222222222 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84982130694 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3674104264 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270972702551 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11057544139 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107813337518 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164400785478 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953339081334 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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