Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work, while others oppose as it may affect their career. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples.
In recent times, most youth has been noticed taking part in volunteer work but some people hold the notion that this participation may have a bad impact on the career. In my opinion, the young generation should engage in this sort of activity only during their free time.
During the youth, people can harvest new experiences and skills which later can help them build a good citizen and successful person. Firstly, in this type of work people came to know about the ground-level problems which are dealt with by people such as hunger, poverty and their condition teach them about the actual meaning of struggle in life. This experience helps them count the blessing they have instead of complaining about what they do not have. These stints can be added to their resume with their job responsibility and the task handled by them which in turn may help them in gaining an optimum job. Nowadays, students with such experience are given priority as they are well aware of the problem of the common people.
On the other hand, some have a viewpoint that they may ruin their careers just for getting engaged in such activities. They might lose their interest and focus on their studies which will damage their future. The matter is not about volunteer work or some unpaid work not done but the degree plays a vital role in getting the job and job is necessary for this competitive world for surviving. Hence, they must be guided to do volunteer work during their off-hours only, which should not impact their study life.
To conclude, volunteer work teaches various experiences and skills which help in getting a good job but it must not cost study time as without education attaining a reputed job is impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, sort of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80067567568 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35305691095 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9410178215 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162047754331 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684307941404 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511974172988 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105106871285 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648282986244 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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