It is considered by some that zoos should be banned, while there are others who think that endangered species can be preserved in them. In my opinion, such sort of places play a crucial role in saving endangered species, and knowledge about their habitat.
On the one hand, some people argue that wildlife parks are cruel. This is due to the fact that in wildlife areas animals have limited space which is not suitable for their survival. Although essential requirements are fulfilled by workers, disturbance in their breeding pattern affects them. Therefore, life of animals in zoos is difficult.
On the other hand, from my perspective, the best place to save different species, particularly endangered species. Under the supervision, of wild animals rhinos, and tigers for example survive. Consequently, zoos are such places which protect wild life. Additionally, these places are a source of awareness about the habitat of wildlife. People who visit there get an opportunity to get a first-hand experience of their living behaviour. Because of this, zoos are the backbone of protecting fauna.
In conclusion, even though people may vary in their opinions, I agree that zoos are essential for wildlife.
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries What are the causes of this What solutions can be offered 73
- Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress Do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries Why is this What effects does this have on society
- Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with the academic subjects at school To what extent do you agree or disagree
- For many people the reason they work hard is to earn money To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26288659794 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81670257041 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7052728433 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5384615385 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282673399766 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969874510402 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083879013673 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168415871993 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212946851655 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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