Few people in society think that the silver screen will vanish sooner and people stop watching movies in cinema theatres due to lack of interest. I strongly disagree with the statement because the entertainment industry is growing higher than ever before, and, I will support my views in the following paragraphs.
To start with, there is no doubt that many people around us still show interest to go to the cinema hall to watch a movie because the digital sound effects which are produced on the big screen cannot be experienced if watched at home. This kind of outing makes people not only get relaxed from household chores but also from mental tensions. A recent survey in Hyderabad mall has shown that many people visit large screens to experience excellent sound effects while watching a movie. Hence, it is quite evident that cinema theatres will not vanish in the future.
Additionally, people are inclined to watch movies in theatres to spend valuable time with their loved ones to strengthen bonding. To elaborate, it is observed that many people go to large screens to get entertained at the fullest with either family or friends. THE HINDU newspaper had reported that the shopping malls which have multiplex movies are crowded during weekends and festivals as most of the people watch cinemas in big screens to spend time together. Hence, I believe that cinema will not be faded out, in return, it will continue to flourish in the decades to come.
However, opponents believe that due to technological advancements there are various forms to watch movies such as the Internet or Netflix which is available at cheaper price than a ticket which is bought to watch in the big screens, and it is likely that going to cinema halls trend would be continued in future times to experience the movie.
To conclude, although there are various platforms to watch a movie in this fast-paced technological world, I believe that the number of people who go to cinema will not be decreased because it is a different kind of enjoyment and excitement which could not be experienced around four walls.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, then, while, kind of, no doubt, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91853932584 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54913060623 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522471910112 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.937611454 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.916666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269090710389 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111711192671 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530525177674 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16161770034 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789900365027 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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