Nowadays almost all shops are serving the people round the clock. In my opinion, it will be a great benefit for the customers, business people, and workers.
On one hand, customers will enjoy the benefits from shops open for 24 hours firstly, they can buy the things freshly like vegetables, groceries, fruits and so on whenever they are in need. Secondly, medicines if someone in the family feels ill suddenly they have a great chance to go to the medical shop and can able to buy and use the medicine on the fly. Furthermore can be any item which they need suddenly can able to get from the shops which make them feel happy. one of my personal experiences Last week when my grandfather was sick and the medicine at home is finished thank god we able to buy the medicine from the century medical shop which is near to my apartment and also operating for 24X7.
On the other hand, Employment firstly it will give more opportunities to the workers. If need to run the shop 24X7 need enough manpower. Secondly, the employers in the shop need to work for longer hours and even sometimes need to work in night shift. Which will be beneficial for them in terms of getting high salaries. Besides, the shop owner will be more beneficial in terms of profit. The latest survey in India showing that 60% of customers prefer to buy things after 6 pm till late at night.
In conclusion, when shops open throughout the day and night will be beneficial for the customers whenever they want can go and buy, workers will be happy by getting the high salaries even the shop owner will be extremely happy by earning the profits.
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they were younger Is it a positive or negative development in your own opinion To what extent do you support this development 81
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 73
- Some people say that students should be given more homework Other say children s should be free to enjoy their youth Discuss both the views and give your opinion 83
- Some people think that only those people who have been working in a company for a long time should get a promotion To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In your letter give details of what went wrong exp 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...give more opportunities to the workers. If need to run the shop 24X7 need enough m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, even so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56701030928 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39311491003 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508591065292 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.39423004 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209786069987 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759349834814 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505834933047 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12883014365 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306822443745 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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