We live in a world where individuals are solely entitled to their opinions, as a result controversies has emerged, some are of the opinion that school children should begin studies at school at an early age, while others posed the stance,they believe that individuals should gain admission into school at age seven. I am of the opinion that school age children are to start formal education as early as possible. In this essay I would explore the reasons for my stance.
Firstly, parenting goes along way in the training of a child. One of the reasons why parent's tend to allow their ward into having a formal education at an early stage is for independency.
It is believe that the earlier one gets into school the better for them. For instance, a child gets into school at age, at age 22, the child has graduated from a higher institution and is now independent. Research as shown that, 80% of independent graduates are within the age bracket of 20 to 25 years of age. I am in support of the above opinion, getting into school early could result into graduating early thereby getting employees and becoming independent, thereafter catering for the needs of the parents.
Secondly, another reason is competition. Individuals feel, once a child start schooling at an early stage their minds are open to learning, they tend to learn how to compete with their mates, thereafter, learning how to compete in the school of life. They tend to apply themselves in order to become studious thereafter becoming rich in future. For example the richest child in the world is 14 years old with billions of dollars in his account, obviously this wasn't attained just in a day. He definitely applied himself and it yielded good for him.
On the other hand, starting school at age seven help the child to be able to deferenciate between good and bad, and also tend to be fully aware of his environment.
In conclusion, am of the stance that commencement of formal education at an early stage helps the child to be independent and also be competitive in school as well as the community at large, on the other hand at age seven, the child learn is fully conscious and able to descern or deferenciate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75392670157 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68795016081 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494764397906 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.439806688 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329334288458 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102229797472 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11467245133 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177663017602 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129880886439 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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