Nowadays with the help of technology, the agriculture field has certainly progressed drastically. However, there are still some countries which face scarcity of the food on a regular basis. This essay will examine the cause and solution to this issue.
For instance, even though the production of food has increased, but it is still out off reach to the people because of increased tax and tariffs on export and import of the food. Hence, the prices of food items like grains, dairy products, and poultry are costly and people living poverty line are not able to afford them. Secondly, transportation is still an issue, several places are not well connected, further transportation to these places not possible due to bad roads, and poor weather conditions. In addition, in developed countries the food wastage is huge. Furthermore, People waste food on a regular basis because their country is rich so they can afford the majority of food while underdeveloped countries are yet struggling to feed their people.
To overcome this issue, governments of the countries can take some steps, for example, food should be exempted from the tax and tariffs, so people can easily afford it. Additionally, as the population of the world is increasing tremendously, the production of genetically modified crops which are high yielding and resilient should be encouraged. Furthermore, governments should invest money to develop proper channels for export and import of food items. In addition to this, people in developed countries should be mindful of food wastage, instead of dumping groceries into the bin, they should donate food or money to the people in need.
In conclusion, world hunger has been an issue for a long time. With the help of leading countries and individuals, the issue can be resolved to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...riffs on export and import of the food. Hence the prices of food items like grains, d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16842105263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83211151756 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7921455707 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141768123896 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514093025032 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505525115132 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919641768794 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338561750122 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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