Nowadays, there is a lot of advancement done in the agriculture sector. Nevertheless, hunger problem still becomes something unavoidable in the world. This essay will explain the reasons why this problem occur and the possible solutions to overcome it.
Firstly, the problem occurs because there is social imbalance in the world. While other countries can experience the benefits from agriculture advancement, there are underdeveloped countries who are still trapped in a poverty and lack of food supplies. As a result, people in these countries suffer from hunger despite the advancements made in agriculture world. Secondly, the problem also happens because of the climate and weather condition. Some countries' climate and weather condition have made impossible for the crops to grow there. This can be flood, lack of rainfall and suffice sunshine that disturbs the growth of crops. And unfortunately, these countries can't afford purchasing the latest technology invention in agriculture sector to overcome this problem.
There are some possible solutions to overcome this problem. Firstly, developed countries who have excess food supplies can aid those underdeveloped countries. Moreover, international organization such as United Nations can also help donating food supplies to underdeveloped countries to overcome hunger problem. Secondly, developed countries who have purchased latest agriculture invention can also share them with underdeveloped countries to help them dealing with climate and weather problem. These newest agriculture inventions will help those countries to produce crops despite the extreme weather that they face.
In conclusion, hunger problem still occurs in the world despite of advancement in agriculture sector because there is social imbalance in the world and climate and weather condition problem. However, there are possible solutions to overcome this problem which include aiding food supplies to underdeveloped countries and sharing latest agriculture invention to underdeveloped countries to overcome weather and climate problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...the climate and weather condition. Some countries climate and weather condition have made...
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Line 3, column 667, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ops. And unfortunately, these countries cant afford purchasing the latest technology...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to purchase'.
Suggestion: to purchase
...ortunately, these countries cant afford purchasing the latest technology invention in agri...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to donate' or 'donate'.
Suggestion: to donate; donate
...on such as United Nations can also help donating food supplies to underdeveloped countri...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'purchased the latest'.
Suggestion: purchased the latest
... Secondly, developed countries who have purchased latest agriculture invention can also share th...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to deal' or 'deal'.
Suggestion: to deal; deal
...h underdeveloped countries to help them dealing with climate and weather problem. These...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99964997958 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7551612031 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.647058824 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256575087048 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105347997223 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571917924375 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20471639931 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710029457586 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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