Advertisements have gained a significant popularity amongst the society. Big companies take help of adverts to increase the sales dramatically. Advertisements can be effective only if they are realistic and cast real life heroes in it. It is a positive developement as it brings economical and employement benefits for the society which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are mainly two factors which makes an advertisement more powerful. First, it should comprises of real facts without any deceiving purpose. Because there are no other ways to check the authenticity of the product, advert is the only option. For instance, a product called fair and lovely is a brand which does not fulfill what commits in the ad. It is considered as cheating with public and they fall in a trap and waste their hard earned money. Hence, this cannot be called as an effective advertisement. Second, organisations can endorse a real life hero to enhance the value of the advertisement provided that the quality of the product is not compromised. People believe on them and buy products which will eventually boost the profit.
There are several factors which makes it a positive development for the society. To commence with, advertisements provide economical benefits and improves the GDP of the country. Increasing sales has a direct connection with profit as it also rapidly increases which enables the companies to pay more tax and contribute in the growth of the nation. In addition, it enhances the employement rate as it brings plethora of job opportunities for thousands of people. For instance, a recent study demonstrated that employement has been increased by 32% with a increase in sales. Therefore, it is beneficial for both; the society and individuals.
To conclude, advertisement is definitely advantageous for the communiy in order to provide employement and monetary benefits as long as they are authentic and does not hold any falsifying facts.
- Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life What are the reasons what are the effects on society and family life 78
- The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance Why do people do operations to change the way they look Do you think it is a positive or negative development 89
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors Do you agree or disagree 65
- Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives Despite warnings many people do not do this What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest 89
- The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public To what extent do you agree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'comprise'
Suggestion: comprise
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22884012539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11902616383 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0941366928 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7894736842 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214780013456 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638533784455 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495710625297 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12643186155 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348547215415 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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