In recent years, Telecommuting usage has increased drastically with the increase in technology advancement. Some people think that it has a positive impact while some are against it. Let us discuss about the same.
To begin, this new method of work from home has made life easier for many people. Especially the students working along with their studies, they can attend both the classes and do work along with the same. Secondly, their would be less traffic on road as commuters are low. Last month, offices in Kerela started allowing people to do work from home while there was draught of drinking water. Government was not able to cope up with the demand of people. Companies can save money by appointing part time employees rather than full time. Employees can work comfortably at there location without time boundation, help in more creativity and more idea generation.
However, telecommuting like other technology has many disadvantages and drawbacks. It is more dependent on computers rather the persons ability. This technology is mainly in danger of viruses and hacking. It lacks face to face interaction and interpersonal skills of individual. Life of new generation has become more and more lazy as less communication is required with bosses.
In my opinion, telecommuting has more positive impact on society rather than negative. It provides more work opportunity to people and helps in increasing job postion. Demand for free lancers are increasing in today's world.
- Some say that due to heavy traffic governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities. While others argue that this is not the right solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and examples. 61
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your 56
- Some say that due to heavy traffic governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities While others argue that this is not the right solution To what extent do you agree or disagree Give your reasons and examples 68
- Many sports players advertised in sports products.Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Companies can save money by appointing part time employees rather than full time. Employ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ointing part time employees rather than full time. Employees can work comfortably at ther...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... more dependent on computers rather the persons ability. This technology is mainly in d...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more and more lazy as less communication is required with bosses. In my opinio...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28033472803 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80858188604 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4469695665 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.1111111111 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2777777778 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166219661236 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450182661325 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383066859538 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842129103357 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385642593608 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.