There are many different types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
music, one of the most important parts of human culture, has a huge number of different types around the world. people love and need it along all human's history . This essay will discuss reasons why music is <span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: inherit; font-size: 29px;">indispensable</span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> in people's life as well as </span>the importance of<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> traditional and international music . </span><br>
No matter where you go, you can always hear music , from artists performing in the street corner ,from the radio and so on . we can not live without music , because it makes us happy , cheers us up , gives us brave. After a long day working, a beautiful song can help you release all the pressures . Sometimes, when we face difficulties or lose hope, music can help us stand up and fight again . For example, Mary Carry's "hero" shows you the truth that you are yourself's hero if you look inside of your soul. people express their emotions such as joy, happy, hope, angry by music which is the common language of whole human race .
music created by people , which naturally has difference between different countries . Each country has their own specific music like China has Peking Opera while at the same time there are some types of music you can hear everywhere such as pop music . there are all necessary , organic parts of the whole art . Compare with the international music which has millions of fans , traditional one has its special culture background which makes it irreplaceable .
In conclusion, music is part of human's nature which give us an efficient way to express . No matter which kinds of music, they are have a lot followers and will have more .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24734982332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68141192168 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4600836922 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35216936739 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122090501963 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933858265445 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217915431011 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884298180989 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.