There are many different types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Suggestion: Music
music, one of the most important parts of hum...
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...er of different types around the world. people love and need it along all humans histo...
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...orld. people love and need it along all humans history . This essay will discuss reaso...
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...ove and need it along all humans history . This essay will discuss reasons why mus...
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...os;> traditional and international music .
No matter where you go, yo...
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... where you go, you can always hear music , from artists performing in the street c...
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... artists performing in the street corner ,from the radio and so on . we can not li...
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... street corner ,from the radio and so on . we can not live without music , because...
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...reet corner ,from the radio and so on . we can not live without music , because it...
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...nd so on . we can not live without music , because it makes us happy , cheers us u...
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...ithout music , because it makes us happy , cheers us up , gives us brave. After a ...
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...because it makes us happy , cheers us up , gives us brave. After a long day workin...
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...g can help you release all the pressures . Sometimes, when we face difficulties or...
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...sic can help us stand up and fight again . For example, Mary Carrys 'hero&apo...
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...s hero if you look inside of your soul. people express their emotions such as joy, hap...
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... the common language of whole human race . music created by people , which nat...
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...mmon language of whole human race . music created by people , which naturally has...
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...human race . music created by people , which naturally has difference between ...
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...s difference between different countries . Each country has their own specific mus...
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...ou can hear everywhere such as pop music . there are all necessary , organic parts...
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...can hear everywhere such as pop music . there are all necessary , organic parts of th...
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...h as pop music . there are all necessary , organic parts of the whole art . Compar...
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...cessary , organic parts of the whole art . Compare with the international music wh...
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...ational music which has millions of fans , traditional one has its special culture...
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...background which makes it irreplaceable . In conclusion, music is part of hum...
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...hich give us an efficient way to express . No matter which kinds of music, they ar...
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...o matter which kinds of music, they are have a lot followers and will have more .
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... have a lot followers and will have more .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24734982332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68141192168 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4600836922 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35216936739 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122090501963 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933858265445 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217915431011 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884298180989 0.056905535591 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.