There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heared everywhere nowadays?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant ex

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...ore amusing than the new ones which has mix of International music like jazz, hip h...
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... Music plays a pivotal role in our life . People pursue music as a career or a ho...
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... a career or a hobby with great interest . A recent survey has revealed that music...
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...vealed that music energises and soothes ones mind . Commuters are seen to be listeni...
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...at music energises and soothes ones mind . Commuters are seen to be listening musi...
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...g to kill the boredom of long journeys. Also it has been seen that people listen son...
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...sic is heard while doing household works . This is the reason why Radio channels a...
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...reason why Radio channels are introduced . It creates public awareness and also pl...
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...of different eras to amuse its listeners Both types of music are important in the...
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...of music are important in their own ways . Golden era old songs were slow music wi...
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...aningful lyrics which soothes human mind . For example , the old songs of Kishore ...
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...s which soothes human mind . For example , the old songs of Kishore Kumar and Mohd...
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...e Kumar and Mohd. Rafi are still enjoyed by every generations . Furthermore trad...
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... are still enjoyed by every generations . Furthermore traditional music like Cla...
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... still enjoyed by every generations . Furthermore traditional music like Classical music ...
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...ic like Classical music is very popular.University music degrees are offered on the basis ...
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... offered on the basis of classical songs . NRI students pursue degrees in Classica...
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...ents pursue degrees in Classical singing . It enriches the cultural heritage and i...
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...dentity at the global level. For Example , the famous Vishwa Bharati University o...
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... For Example , the famous Vishwa Bharati University offers carnatic and classical...
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...natic and classical music degree courses . Students at a global level take admissi...
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... level take admission to this university . New songs are equally enjoyed by ne...
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...gs are equally enjoyed by new generation . These contain high bass beats and remix...
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...r the influence of International music, many different kinds of songs have been introduced lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96505376344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54898319433 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.2781153933 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9583333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378733159907 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972562172291 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934045312092 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235349994315 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457833025117 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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