There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music has been deemed to be the essence of life and the varieties express different forms, phases or mood which one can relate to more so than in the past. Consequently, its presence is required in every occasion. But despite traditional music being a reflection of the culture of a country, I believe international music has more preference. I will discuss the reasons for my choice in the essay below.
Music can be used for a number of occasions. In any celebration, good and upbeat melodies can liven up the mood. Patriotic ones can express our love for the country. Furthermore, music has been proven to motivate or relax one's mind set while exercising or relaxing, which would otherwise have felt like a daunting task.
Although there is no doubt that traditional music is important in a country but international music has appeared to become equally important. Traditional music usually reflects the culture of a country, which is mostly suitable for special occasions. In fact, these music have a specific tune of music which does not express other emotions of an individual. On the other hand, international music has a different tune for every mood. In fact, these music has been noted to alter the mood of a person as well. Apart from having a profound impact on the sentiments people also get to learn about other cultures. They get insights on traditions other than the local ones.
To sum up, I believe, music is needed in life to make things more cheerful and it provides us with valuable knowledge on other cultures, although traditional musical also important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this music' or 'these musics'?
Suggestion: this music; these musics
...uitable for special occasions. In fact, these music have a specific tune of music which doe...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this music' or 'these musics'?
Suggestion: this music; these musics
...different tune for every mood. In fact, these music has been noted to alter the mood of a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, in fact, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92910447761 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75554838324 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7566892096 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386310125564 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135288164355 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118892339937 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244420419306 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875546642589 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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