Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Although, vacation destination is the personal choice and it depends on individual's choice. The topic of a majority of visitor prefer to visit the places where weather condition is difficult has ignited the hot discussion among many. There are various advantage and disadvantage of all tourist location, but here we will discuss the pro's and con's to choose the destination where the weather is not suitable. I will provide some justification and evidence to strengthen my view on this discussion.
To embark upon, this is the era of adventure. Unlike the previous century, where people like to stay safely and calmly, the modern generation like to do the adventure's like hiking, skewing, et cetra. First, To choose the places like Sahara desert or the Antarctic give the space and wide variety of adventure. Allow me to elaborate this statement for better comprehension by giving an example of mine. I love to explore the new places with hiking and mounting, unfortunately where I can hike is the place with rough weather situation, but to pursue my passion I love to go these places. Moreover, harsh places are cost-effective in terms of saving and to spend a cheap vacation with lots of adventure.
On contrary, some crowd wants the leisure, so they don't like the harsh places. There is some con's to spend the vacation in a grating place as they have limited resources and medical facilities. If a person seeks medical emergency in the desert of Sahara, have to face many challenges like the communication and transportation. The list of hikers- who won't able to reach home safely- is large.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention assertively that spending vacation in the harsh place is good in terms of adventure and cost saving but it can be dangerous in terms of medical emergency and communication issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96078431373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86864822476 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9654943046 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181816738678 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532976386022 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554376947282 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950635741356 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456468408508 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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