06/24/2018 - 07:12
The tourism industry has been booming swiftly over the past decades. Even though tourism provides a great deal of revenue for many countries, it brings umpteen environmental hazards mainly air pollution and disposal of solid wastes. This situation can be managed by awareness to public and implementing laws.
The key problem associated with tourist activity is pollution of air. This is to say, transportation has become an inextricable factor in this industry, and people start to explore new places more and more. This invites a large scale burning of fossil fuels and therefore, lethal gases released into the atmosphere. As a result, atmospheric temperature begins to rise and make the planet not suitable for life in. For instance, a recent study in India shows that the content of CO is alarmingly high in major tourist places. Accumulation of non-biodegradable materials is another dire consequence of global tourism in which trippers throw solid residues at places they visit. It disturbs the equilibrium of ecology either. Coral bleaching in the Pacific region is a perfect example for this pressing issue.
A viable solution to tackle this menace is public education on mass media. This must include the reasons for environmental distress and aftermaths of such imprudent actions. This strategy creates an impression among the citizens about the necessities of exercising safe and efficient methods that reduce the implications on the planet. As an illustration, education programmes through short films made a significant impact on curbing the use of plastic items in Malaysia. Furthermore, an outright ban on private vehicles in ecologically fragile areas would increase the dependence of public transportation systems and eventually enhance the quality of air.
On the whole, environmental damage is an inevitable byproduct of tourism; however, it can be deterred by educating the public and stringent actions against the operations of private automobiles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5342019544 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06968285965 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661237785016 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8160413583 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982897848389 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280490716232 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350832360905 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723206329289 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467330850994 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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