Family is the basic unit of social structure. With the passage of time, it has been observed that relations among the family members are becoming sour and this also affects the tradition of eating meals together. I will cast light on the factors responsible for it and its impacts on both the family and society in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, there is a plethora of reasons why family members rarely eat meals together. The hectic schedule of both the parents and the children is the predominant factor responsible for this changing scenario. Nowadays, both mother and father are working to make their hearth burning and due to which they do not have enough time to spend with their families and off springs. Sometimes they have to work overtime to meet the requirements of the work place and this leads to make them eating in the company premises or by ordering the food online. Apart from this, children are so busy in their studies to achieve great academic performance. Besides, attending eight hours of official school they are send for tution classes by their parents and sometimes language classes in the weekends for their development which makes them busy round a clock.
This gradual alter in the trend has huge impact on the family and society. Firstly, having meal with family provides a great chance to bond with each other but eventually they are losing opportunities to share daily stories with each other. Also, family bond is weakening as parents have less quality time to spend with their children and this is the stepping stone for their off spring to become defiant and heedless. On the social level, some traditions may be lost and family values are might not appreciated as people do not feel the need to come back home after the work for a meal together. For example, special occasions such as on New Year's Eve, family feasts serve as an important event but it is regretful that this tradition is constantly disappearing.
To recapitulate, I would like to say that various factors are attributable for disappearing family meals and this has damaging effects on both families and societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, may, so, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89502762431 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51684596241 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6255532179 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.133333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177306172231 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714035446991 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574891157573 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12712309457 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422302587202 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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