Majority of the earth is occupied by water, and in it's absence the existence of every living thing will be threatened. Water should always be free given that it is a natural resource. In this essay I will discuss why banning the sale of bottled water will expose people to bacteria, and the effects of plastic bottles after it has become a waste to our environment.
On the one hand, the main reason why selling bottled water should not be banned is because people will be exposed to all kinds of bacteria resulting from drinking untreated water. To illustrate, when you do not drink water that has undergone treatment such as bottled water, you can get infected with typhoid as a result. Furthermore, if you drink treated water whenever the feeling of thirst arises, then it will help in the prevention of diarrhea. Clearly, given that the government does not ban bottled water, it would assist in preventing bacteria caused by drinking untreated water.
On the other hand, there should be a ban on the sale of bottled water because of the negative impact it will cause to the environment. Plastic bottles, for instance, litter the environment when they are not properly disposed. Surroundings should be kept clean! In addition, refuse dumps are always burnt regularly in Nigeria. Environmental pollution occurs once these dumps are on fire. It is possible to thrive in a pollution-free environment after the government bans the sale of bottled water.
To conclude, I have discussed
why banning the sale of bottled water will expose people to bacteria, and the effects of plastic bottles whenever it becomes a waste to our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70683941639 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503623188406 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3892725612 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438465670623 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180952464076 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118428150558 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227863471637 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127608011735 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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