Some people may argue that financial benefit is key factor behind choosing a profession, where others would disagree. I strongly agree that salary is considered to be the top priority in choosing a job and this essay will elaborate on this.
A recent study, suggests that financial benefit is the driving factor behind most of the job application.
In other words, employees usually look at the salary package beforehand to be ensured that their expectations will be met.
Even when mid-career professional switch to another company, the only thing they would never compromise is monthly compensation. For example, an online survey conduced by world economic forum shows than in Europe young people have marked higher wages as the reason behind selecting any particular career path.
On the other hand, some believe that passion plays a key role in the professional choices. To elaborate, people go for the occupation that will give them mental satisfaction and will full their interest in that field of work. For instance, artists are usually low paid and they would still sacrifice any other high-paid job offer as long as they are satisfied with their artistic aspiration. However, these are exceptional cases and in many situations, even artists choose to apply for a corporate position do to financial security.
To conclude, in this modern world salary attract people most in choosing a job. Although a passion for a profession may play a significant role in some people's career choices, it cannot sustain in the long run without monetary support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20158102767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70499580343 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2089180146 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138709097797 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056734258927 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665030940779 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750554323011 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432093018869 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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