There have been massive developments in technology during last decades, which is questioning whether mankind could be replaced in specific occupations from artificial intelligence computers. Some of the jobs that are more in danger of being replaced by robots are the manufacturing factories, packaging and shipping, customer service and healthcare and this is only the beginning. This situation could lead to unprecedented crime rate and poverty, it could also raise the question whether human beings are going to be controlled from robots in the future.
One of the first industries to use AI robots to assemble products and package them for shipment. There are used to assemble more complicated items, including electronics, cars, and home appliances. Not only this, these robots have drastically increased manufacturing output in the last years. For instance, from 2000 to 2010 Canada and U.S. have seen 5.6 million factory jobs disappeared in which a whopping 85 percent resulted from automation. In addition to manufacturing, packaging and shipping industries have incorporated robots for some time to make distribution more effective. When it comes to shipping Amazon is at the forefront of automation.
The most pessimistic forecast regarding industrial automation is that million of people may lose their jobs because robots will replace them. This will lead to more crime rate from as a consequence of poverty. Also what is more worrying in other imaginations is that robots could rise beyond any imagination and control humans.
To sum up, there are many industries which endanger people workplace due to work automation. This could lead to crime and poverty and also will raise questions whether we will be controlled by robots in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...from artificial intelligence computers. Some of the jobs that are more in danger of being r...
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Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...e rate and poverty, it could also raise the question whether human beings are going to be controlled...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the first industries to use AI robots to assemble products and package them fo...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me to make distribution more effective. When it comes to shipping Amazon is at the f...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... rate from as a consequence of poverty. Also what is more worrying in other imaginat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41304347826 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96514088898 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7387514568 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202716044413 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068915135005 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049120871766 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121263580466 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583540890856 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.