The world would be a better place if we all spoke the same language. Do you agree?
Nowadays, with the rapid growth of integration and globalization among countries as well as the strong development of science and technology in general and the internet in particular, people can easily interconnect and communicate with each other in terms of tourism, goods exchange, etc. Although a vision of the whole world sharing the same language is completely possible, in my opinion, a common language will threaten the loss of culture and identity.
Firstly, a common language would mean there are no language barriers. According to some people, if humanity uses the same language, it will reduce distrust and hatred among peoples. Because language is a piece of many wonderful things that make up humanity, besides areas such as music, painting, cuisine and regional culture. Not only that, using the common language will open up many opportunities for learning and working, relationships between people, or countries together.
However, the undeniable truth is that those suspicion and hatred have not only decreased but also tended to increase. That is only theoretically true and the reality is that we are still witnessing huge disagreements and conflicts within the nations such as the Middle East, North Korea, and even regional discrimination, which is still extremely common within Vietnam.
Furthermore, the use of common language raises concerns that it will cause "linguistic diversity" to be lost. The reason is that language is the characteristic of each country and has many ties to culture, family and even personal identity. Loss of a language means the loss of an important part of a culture. For many people, learning a common language is to "upgrade" themselves for the future, but using their native language is the connection between them and the past.
In conclusion, English, Chinese, or any other language can take turns dominating world culture, but one thing is completely sure: people remain loyal to their native language, no matter how complicated and outdated it is. Because language is not only a means of communication but also a culture, a specific color for each nation, each individual, and it is so important that we can not almost eliminate that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this suspicion' or 'those suspicions'?
Suggestion: this suspicion; those suspicions
... However, the undeniable truth is that those suspicion and hatred have not only decreased but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32670454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05920271772 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5562211913 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14553158388 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558151908964 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443923229915 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780098734254 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294070296592 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.