Generally, it has a human tendency to compare itself with others. This trend is more prevalent in young blood. Majority of the youngsters are easily impressed by the behavior of others in the similar age. This essay intends to discuss both pros and cons of this happening in these days.
There are various disadvantages of joining accompany of peers. One of them is, kids engaged in those activities which are inappropriate for them. For instance, kids try smoke, drink and go gambling when their friends insist them to do so. Hence, it makes them stubborn. By influencing from others, kids pressurize their parents to buy expensive clothes and accessories etc. which they can not afford. Another is that, kids like to spend most of their time with their friends, and they unable to do study properly. Because of that, kids become depressed when they got lower grades than from their peers.
On the other hand, peer pressure have various advantages which can not be ignored. Firstly, kids get an opportunity to study in a group which not only help to sort out their doubts but also make them more confident to share their views without any hesitation. Also, kids might receive inspiration from their group members to perform well in studies or any activity. Secondly, some peers are quite sportive and they influence others to engage in sports events. In this way, kids can enjoy these activities to remain healthier and also opt it to make bright career by playing well.
To conclude, it is rightly said that every coin has two sides. So, peer pressure has both positive and negatives sides which can not be neglected. It is depend upon the child to choose his friend circle wisely. As long as the friend are a positive influence and parental guidance is provided. peer pressure can not be expected to be threat for a child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Peer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80634920635 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43176675361 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4198771112 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8181818182 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3181818182 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217715916857 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056517390516 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601729001215 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11216038315 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527445833247 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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