Dear Amart,
I hope this letter of mine finds you and your family in ravishing health. the purpose of my writing is regarding your interest and curiosity in products that could be exported from India for the expansion of your import and export business.
In my opinion, the specific products could be clothing range like (ethnic or fusion one) and ornaments from India could provide a large profit from the Russian market. As you know India is a multicultural country, clothing from every part of it is diverse in wearing and vivid in many forms. I know a few villages in Rajasthan, Chennai and North-Eastern part of India where some self-dependent women make these things on cheap rates with quality.
Indian culture is very popular and interesting in Russia, people there always lured by the range of ethnic clothing with style, also authentication with purity and strength are a few the virtue of these items. In addition, associating these local workers can be an international benefit for both. I am also in favor of introducing an application for smartphones for the advertising these items, I also have a prototype of that.
I hope you think about my recommendation and reply soon, I will always be ready to help. Provide my best to your family.
Best Regards,
Mani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ou and your family in ravishing health. the purpose of my writing is regarding your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, in addition, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7907249688 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8526692393 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3636363636 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15376972968 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053861731875 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665345436688 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967347484037 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803251872817 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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